Hey Malachi, Your small poster is really bright and understanding for me: I like how you set out two pictures and used footprints to show yourself walking. From my point of view it seems as if the Nature walk was very fun and interesting but maybe if you proofread your small paragraph it would make much more sense.
Hey Malachi,
ReplyDeleteYour small poster is really bright and understanding for me: I like how you set out two pictures and used footprints to show yourself walking.
From my point of view it seems as if the Nature walk was very fun and interesting but maybe if you proofread your small paragraph it would make much more sense.