Hi Malachi, I think that the way you used the speech marks within your writing was very smart of you to do. I can connect with what Jackson had said when he told the teacher that he just made what came to his mind. A little advice for you is that you always proofread your writing before you post it online because sometimes you will leave mistakes like punctuation and spelling mistakes.
Hi Malachi,
ReplyDeleteI think that the way you used the speech marks within your writing was very smart of you to do. I can connect with what Jackson had said when he told the teacher that he just made what came to his mind. A little advice for you is that you always proofread your writing before you post it online because sometimes you will leave mistakes like punctuation and spelling mistakes.
Mikaela
Hi Malachi ,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you use speech marks for when people are talking ,
I can connect to when Jackson just made what he had in mind ,
I think that you should check your grammar , also to check if you're writing makes sense.
Good job!